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TP7: Writing Formal Emails for Making Arrangements
Upper Intermediate level

Description

In this lesson, upper-intermediate level students will delve into the specifics of writing formal emails to make arrangements. The lesson is designed to provide students with a comprehensive understanding of the structure, style, and language used in formal emails. The class will begin with a lead-in discussion about making arrangements via emails, followed by a quick reading of a self-written formal email sample. The students will then answer comprehension questions to ensure they understand the email's general theme and purpose. The lesson will further focus on the analysis of the email's structure and style, highlighting the introduction, body, and conclusion, along with the formal language used. The teacher will provide examples and explanations to clarify when and why such language is necessary. After understanding the structure and language of formal emails, the students will be asked to plan and write their own formal email based on a given scenario. The lesson will then transition into a writing task, where students will write their emails. Once the writing task is completed, the class will be divided into groups of three to share their emails and give feedback to their peers. This activity will be followed by an open class feedback session, where common errors or misconceptions will be addressed, and suggestions for improvement will be provided. The aim of this lesson is not only to improve students' formal writing skills but also to enhance their understanding of the appropriate use of formal language in professional settings. The lesson is designed to be interactive, engaging, and applicable to real-life situations, making the learning process more effective and enjoyable.

Materials

Main Aims

  • The primary objective of this lesson is to familiarize and practice writing formal emails for making arrangements. By the end of the session, students should be able to draft a clear, concise, and professional email, demonstrating their understanding of formal language and email structure.

Subsidiary Aims

  • The secondary goal is to enhance the students' understanding of formal language and its appropriate usage in professional settings, particularly in emails. Students will learn to identify and apply formal language features in their written communication.

Procedure

Warmer/Lead-in (3-4 minutes) • To set lesson context and engage students

Activity: Start a discussion on making arrangements via emails. Ask students, "Have you ever had to write an email to make arrangements? What was it for? How did you make sure your message was clear and formal?" Visual Aid: https://jamboard.google.com/d/1nBJlb6cU6hGNtYqs9gZDaDQ59ZwOZjZbVqYTRpVcfD8/viewer?f=0

Exposure (4-5 minutes) • To provide a model of production expected in coming tasks through reading/listening

Activity: Share a self-written formal email sample on screen. Let students read it briefly. Ask a couple of comprehension questions related to the email to ensure students understand its general theme and purpose. Visual Aid: https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1fzg57e-xO4uDE-d1hTnQV72QH5pA4wQuTza4eEGl-lU/edit#slide=id.p

Useful Language (8-10 minutes) • To highlight and clarify useful language for coming productive tasks

III. Language Focus (7 minutes) Activity: Analyze the structure and style of the formal email. Highlight the introduction, body, and conclusion. Point out the formal language used and explain when and why such language is necessary. Refer to Ex 3 p.85 from the workbook to provide more examples of formal language. Introduction: The introduction of the email starts with a formal salutation, "Dear Professor Johnson," and then proceeds to introduce the sender and establish the purpose of the email. "I hope this email finds you well. My name is Alex Smith, and I am a final year student in the Computer Science department. I am writing to request a meeting..." The writer uses formal and polite language, which is appropriate for a professional or academic context. The introduction is brief and to the point, clearly establishing the purpose of the email right from the start. Body: The body of the email provides more details about the request, including the topic to be discussed in the meeting and the sender's progress so far. "I have been working diligently on the preliminary stages of the project, and I believe I've made significant progress." The sender continues to use formal language, and maintains a polite and respectful tone. This part of the email is informative and concise, providing necessary details but avoiding unnecessary information that could detract from the main purpose of the email. Conclusion: The conclusion of the email includes a respectful acknowledgment of the recipient's potentially busy schedule, an offer of flexibility in scheduling the meeting, and a polite closing remark. "I understand that your schedule is likely very busy, so I am flexible and open to any time and date that would be convenient for you. I estimate that our meeting would take approximately 30 minutes. Thank you very much for considering my request. I look forward to the possibility of meeting with you soon." The email is signed off with "Best regards, Alex Smith." This is a typical formal sign-off, which helps maintain the professional tone of the email. Formal Language: Formal language is used throughout the email. Examples include phrases such as "I hope this email finds you well," "I am writing to request," "I have been working diligently," and "Thank you very much for considering my request." This type of language is necessary when writing to superiors, professors, or anyone in a formal or professional context, as it shows respect and maintains a professional tone. Remember, the use of formal language depends on the context and the relationship between the sender and the recipient. In a professional or academic context like this, formal language is the most appropriate choice. Visual Aid: https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1fzg57e-xO4uDE-d1hTnQV72QH5pA4wQuTza4eEGl-lU/edit#slide=id.p

Productive Task(s) (18-22 minutes) • To provide an opportunity to practice target productive skills

IV. Preparation / Planning (2 minutes) Activity: Ask students to plan their own formal email for making arrangements. Give them a scenario: e.g., they need to arrange a meeting with their professor to discuss their project. They should take a few minutes to jot down key points they want to include in their email. Visual Aid: https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1w8tWd4sWjxTVHQ6SPID_q7qvFttZiO3ybIPG3w3Z9k0/edit#slide=id.p Worksheet: https://docs.google.com/document/d/10IKL3t4I5q5aqiuWGszH-GqN3ALMGYxYqs5Ibz0qeCg/edit V. Writing Task (15 minutes) Activity: Students write their own formal emails based on the scenario provided. Remind them to use the correct structure and formal language they've learned. VI. Publishing (8 minutes) Activity: Divide students into groups of three. In breakout rooms, students share their emails and receive feedback from their peers on both content and language accuracy. Visual Aid: Use an example from the class.

Feedback and Error Correction (5-7 minutes) • To provide feedback on students' production and use of language

VII. Feedback on Content & Language (7 minutes) Activity: Conduct open class feedback. Ask for a volunteer (or nominate a student) to share their work with the class. Highlight any errors and good language use, promoting peer correction. Follow this with Delayed Error Correction (DEC), addressing any common errors or misconceptions and offering suggestions for improvement. This revised lesson plan aligns with your provided time breakdown and materials, focusing on the skills of writing formal emails for making arrangements. The activities aim to engage the students in a meaningful context, provide practice in the target language, and offer opportunities for peer feedback and correction.

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