Writing descriptive details
Upper intermediate level
To enable students to practice using descriptive language for writing scene detail, in the context of a review of their favourite restaurant.
To provide practice in reading for gist and detail
To provide practice in critiquing other people's written work
To provide clarification and practice in using adjectives in the correct order
Procedure (40-45 minutes)
Instructions: Think about your favourite restaurant and what you like about it. I'll give you one minute to think, then three minutes in breakout rooms to share with your classmates. Teacher introduces the lesson, gives Ss 1 minute to gather their thoughts, then assigns Ss to BORs for 3 minutes. Teacher brings Ss back to the main room and elicits a few answers.
Task 1 instructions: I'm going to show you two reviews about the same cafe in Porto, Portugal. Read them quickly and decide which one sounds more interesting. You have two minutes for this task. ICQs: Are you reading fast or slow? (fast) How long do you have? (two minutes) Teacher gives instructions, shows the reviews, and gives students two minutes to skim read them. Teacher then asks students to share in the chatbox which one they found most interesting. Task 2 instructions: In breakout rooms, look in more detail at the reviews and discuss why review 2 is more interesting to read. What does it have that review 1 doesn't have? You have 4 minutes. Teacher gives instructions and allocates Ss to breakout rooms. Teacher monitors breakout rooms then brings Ss back to the main room and elicits answers, showing slides about descriptive language and added detail.
Meaning: Teacher shares slide with Ss showing that descriptive language often focuses on the five senses. Teacher shows examples from the text, asks CCQs to clarify meaning, and elicits which sense they are referring to. (3 minutes) Form: Teacher shows slide with examples from text of adjectives + noun and elicits form from students. Teacher shows slide with correct order of adjectives then allocates Ss to BORs for 3 minutes to discuss the order and whether the examples from the text follow that order. Teacher brings Ss back to main room and conducts OCFB. Structure: Teacher shows the text again and elicits how many paragraphs there are (3). Teacher shows options for the content of each paragraph and gives students 1 minute to match them. Ss then share their answers with each other in the group chat before Teacher elicits answers.
Instruction: Now it's your turn. You have 15 minutes to write a review about your favourite restaurant. Teacher shows Ss the layout they should follow and the feedback criteria, then demonstrates use of the padlet. Teacher asks ICQs: How long do you have? (15 minutes). What should you do if you need help? (send a private message to the teacher). Students then write their own reviews. Teacher monitors and provides guidance if necessary.
Teacher reminds students of the rating criteria, then allocates pairs for peer review. Ss give a rating and write a comment on their partner's work, then if they have time left leave comments on other students' work (4 minutes). Teacher then conducts OCFB / recap (3 minutes).